Friday, 6 June 2014
Mum is the best.
Mum is the best!!!!!!!!!
My favourite person is my mum because she helps me and takes me and my sisters out to the library and the mall. Her Dark Red shoulder length hair is very wavy. She is tall and slim. Whenever I hug her she squeezes me so tight. My mum is always there when I need her.She pushes me to do good in school so I can be a role model to my baby sister.
Mum is very cheeky and is always happy she is always doing mysterious things. My mum is sporty because she teaches me and my sisters how to do things for Gymnastics and Basketball. She loves to just chill with me and my sisters at the library or the wave pools. My mum likes to be herself not someone else.
My mum plays darts she goes to a Semi final , Quarter final and a Final. My mum is lucky because she gets trophies. My mum works at a Hotel in Auckland.She does cleaning the rooms. I love my mum and she loves me.
From your beloved daughter Atita
This is what I did for descriptive writing about my lovely mum I love my mum and she loves me.
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Well done!! Great Vocab I liked to feel your mums precious squeezed hugs. My Mum is also sporty she likes Netball. Next time you could organise your sentence and be specifc with were and how you should put your sentence structure in the right place. I really liked how your mum is sporty.
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